when i do a track i export the audio and delete the patch/tone etc. this means i can't go back and obsessively change stuff. so i dont really have anything unfinished.

i had live open though and un-finished my previous track by deleting the pad and just leaving the beat. then i had more filtering going on throughout (loop slippery, electronica 2)

it still sounds pretty finished to me coz of the tonal reverb elements

questions for feedback:
is there any way of getting rid of that distortion at the start?
how would you fix the judder at the 3 minute mark?
what would you add to this given that the beat is quite dynamic/full?
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