Acoustic, Rock Curtis Pea
God

Another old song I wrote many months ago. Eh, what can I say about this one? The melody sounds too similar to the last previous song but much worse with the bridge sounding too similar to the verse. I did the liked the intro and outro as well as the lyrics, and the use of a sus4 chord seemed unusual in a minor key song (well I wouldn't exactly say this song was in a minor key though, but the whole thing throughout has a "minor key" feeling going on until we arrive on the coda. Which puts in the key of F actually.), but other than that, it seems forgetful to me. This was also my attempt on writing fewer lyrics than my previous songs, which I was quite happy to won over that feat.

Lyrics:

V1:
I gave god my hand
He wouldn't understand
I believe he was a man
necessary to the land

V2:
He cut faith
The man was necessary
The boat will then have land
The land will have a boat

B1:
Even though he could cut a boat
And then he will wrote
And then be stoked
I have faith in this land

V3:
I gave a man a god
My land wouldn't believe this
The hand cut faith
He even wrote "understand"

O:
I was necessary
Believe a land could wrote I

Recording gear:
Yamaha FG370S
2006 Logitech USB mic

Recorded and mixed with Audacity.