My submission for /r/songamonth April 2016.

This was....a weird one. I started this by hearing a loop I heard online. It just so happened to be the chord progression of Canon in D. So, I recreated the loop with my own piano, made the base of the song, and made some lyrics. After finishing the majority of the song, my father (Scott van Teeffelen) jumped in and added some awesome guitar and bass work, along with final mixing and mastering.

The song is meant to be about a guy who loves a girl, even if he knows that she's controlling. It's basically a love-blind relationship, where the guy can't acknowledge that the girl can do anything wrong, while it is blatantly obvious to everyone around him.

LYRICS:
I don’t know, what’s going on in my mind, tonight
All I know is that, I just want to, to do it right,
Here we are now, just you and I, in my sight
But you know, I’m just an actor and baby, you know, you’re the playwright.

You say jump and I say how high, but I promise you girl, if I could, I would fly,
And I would go to heaven, but why go there? When all of it, is in your stare,
Everyone else says that you just pull strings, but when I’m with you, I feel like a king,
No servants, no peasants, just you and I until we die, and that is why I will try,
To carry on, from dusk to dawn, everywhere you go I’ll tag along,
To eternity’s end I would follow you, there isn’t anything I’d not do,
But alas I’m a puppet, and you’re writing all the lines, I hope this isn’t the time to say goodbye,
I’ll remember always, in prose or rhyme,
I’ll never forget all the good times.

I don’t know, what’s going on in my mind, tonight
All I know is that, I just want to, to do it right,
Here we are now, just you and I, in my sight
But you know, I’m just an actor and baby, you know, you’re the playwright.

Back again with a vengeance, and my love on the life, though I still struggle to find a rhyme,
I apologize for any odd lines out, it’s hard to put into words,
How I feel, so used, so good, like it’s all so wrong, but it’s how it should.
I guess It’s so confusing, the way you’re using but if we,
Stop, and take hold, we better, hurry ‘fore we get too old,
I might not get another chance, another look, another glance,
‘Fore the gates of heaven close on me, showing who I really want to be,
I’m falling now, but my heart’s still clinging,
All the way down, and I’m still singing like,
To carry on, from dusk to dawn, everywhere you go I’ll tag along,
To eternity’s end I would follow you,
But alas I’m a puppet, and you’re writing all the lines, I hope this isn’t the time to say goodbye,
I’ll remember always, in prose or rhyme,
I’ll never forget all the good times.

I don’t know, what’s going on in my mind, tonight
All I know is that, I just want to, to do it right,
Here we are now, just you and I, in my sight
But you know, I’m just an actor and baby, you know, you’re the playwright.

Credits:
Vocals, Writing, Composing, Mixing: Tanner van Teeffelen
Guitar, Bass, Mixing, Mastering : Scott van Teeffelen

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